Keeping dear

I left home for college. Transitioning.

I came down from high above

Looking around for the place I love

New City can't be home

Here I've become so alone.

Warm air swallows my skin

caution before I begin

Letting out the longest sigh

I prepare to be eaten alive.

Swimming waters unscathed

I ignore calls for my name,

carting off my old things

it's time to move again.

Holding me so close 

I remember who I've lost

The touch was all I needed

I'm sorry for my mistake.

If there's a chance to change

don't try more of the same.

Words hurt and crimes pain

Listen to my tired exchange.

It's not true what they say

Adjusting isn't always easy

and I'm scared of when

I'll forget who I've been.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Your intent is there...
but the rhyme is forced a bit...
you could make a rewrite of this ---
and give that emphasis to the reader...
as is...it is what it is...

[Eve Ola]

I came down from high above
Looking around for the place I love
New City can't be home
Here I've become so alone.

I love the rhythmic tone . Well done

[diaphanous]

Thank you so much :)

[MoriartyMesa]

I am sorry to say, I have too many questions of the wording. I found this interesting. However there was something I found to be a weakness in the armor.

Why?