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Heartbreaker

Heartbreaker

A Poem by diaphanous

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This is a previous version of Heartbreaker .



She always wanted what she couldn't have
she chased and pulled, played and grabbed.
tossed countless people aside like leaves
let their sadness fade into mere memories.

She found a new man
who treated her like a queen
he loved her more than she could stand
so she cheated on him.

How could she be so selfish and cruel?
treating him like nothing more than a fool.
twisting his mind 
playing with his heart
even after he'd been so kind,
with her from the very start.

She hadn't always been this way
there'd been a time, not long ago
when she loved someone more everyday
more love than that someone would know
and constantly took her for granted
and didn't love her enough.

That someone broke her and didn't care
how devastatingly hard she cried.
She learned never again to lay her soul bare
keep everything she felt locked up inside.
To always hide from pain
she didn't want to feel anything.

Each time she hurt anyone
she felt completely numb.
hollow-eyed,
hands tied,
with her frozen heart,
she ignored their suffering.

She just kept waiting and waiting
to feel something.

© 2011 diaphanous




Reviews

first time i read about a woman who cheats here, that was clear, but u know she might love someone who is not a man , she might love someone in her family like her mother more than him and also give her more attention and also try to destroy her man just for the sake of her mother so she can be happy. what do u think of that?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Phew, I totally got lost in the poem! It touches the heart. Simple words used to describe the intricacy of feelings... loved it!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 28, 2011
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Tags: pain, heartbreak, love, cheating, numb, sick, hate

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diaphanous
diaphanous

San Francisco, CA



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