The look you make when you're thinking really hard makes me smile

The look you make when you're thinking really hard makes me smile

A Poem by dillonjensen
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Just another short poem. I like short poems that force the mind to wander aimlessly. Now I've invaded your head, smile.

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She has no idea what I've in store.
A plan so clever, she will adore.
Smiling and laughter, baby.
And that's what I will do it for.

© 2014 dillonjensen


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I liked this a lot. You capture and draw out multiple emotions from the reader which is very impressive.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

9 Years Ago

Your words humble me. Thank you for reviewing!
It's the element of surprise that make the moment special...

Lovely thoughts in short verse, Dillon... Nicely done!~xoxo~:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

9 Years Ago

Why thank you! Your words mean a lot to me. :)
short and simple, good rhyme and meaning. thanks for share

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing! Appreciate it!

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