Jar Freak

I wrote the original of this one about 14 years ago, and I tried to remember it as best I could. Too bad the notebook is 12,000 miles away right now. I'll update when I get the real one.

look it ma

he does tricks

watch him go

 

yes dear

the gods gave him

more things to know

 

why do his eyes

look tired sad and old

 

the fire of his heart

has long since gone cold

 

but why ma would he

know and still seek

 

keep walking dear

it's the same with the freaks

 

Reviews

[defenestrator]

Ha! Two words: funhouse mirror.

[Jet Lag]

hmmmnn... must be fiction. i'm not sure your ma would tell you to keep walking past the freaks. ;)
will help with the original, asap.

[Chistie]

is supposed to be funny or sad!! i'm not really sure!! But i like it!!