standing there

a moment passes, then one more.

some way of looking-

-like nothing before.

i couldn't tell of tomorrow;

only, if there be chance, 

i'll find a way through.

in good measure, 

i leave my heart

with you.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

The flow was great and this made me feel good as well. You did a really great. The last stanza was my favorite. Thank you for sharing.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the bit of rhyming, I also really like the ending three lines. Nice one.

[Tate Morgan]

I like the subtle lilting cadence of this

[DiMar4u]

on the edge, smiling..looking down;
taking in the view-thinking to myself:
"i believe in you."