standing there

standing there

A Poem by DiMar4u

a moment passes, then one more.
some way of looking-
-like nothing before.
i couldn't tell of tomorrow;
only, if there be chance, 
i'll find a way through.
in good measure, 
i leave my heart
with you.

© 2014 DiMar4u


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The flow was great and this made me feel good as well. You did a really great. The last stanza was my favorite. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the bit of rhyming, I also really like the ending three lines. Nice one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the subtle lilting cadence of this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

on the edge, smiling..looking down;
taking in the view-thinking to myself:
"i believe in you."

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Author

DiMar4u
DiMar4u

Lodi, NJ



About
-you might describe me as a magnanimous perpetual transmuter, or you may simply point and say "..that guy over there-" more..

Writing
i am. i am.

A Poem by DiMar4u