ostrich eyes

ostrich eyes

A Poem by DiMar4u
"

drop the subtext

"

of all things everywhere, what matters most is now..





linguistics and heuristics:

more than statistics;

a moment measures might

when it's more than a fight.


--move towards the light.




reality decided by your thoughts and words

with that look on your face, i know u think it's absurd.

once again your a victim, and i don't have to say

the dungeon you sleep in, you paved your own way


a million little choices, like a pebble or stone

you pile 'em in your pocket, now your feel'n

the load;


but, 

don't you think it's stupid you should take such offense,

didn't feel it come'n now you're hit'n the road,

you "find" the need to explode--


how's the whole ostrich surprise

couldn't see the punch, 

 too busy close'n ur eyes,

and like the words that burned you 

and that sorry look of despise,


i can't be there to guide you if 

you gouge me with lies--


tell me}


          : the dungeon won't hold you no more,

          : you find no need to settle the score,

          : get the gumption, lay it down on the floor,


-i've seen it before-









© 2014 DiMar4u


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I'm usually not fond of rhyming poetry, I feel like the content can suffer from being boxed into what word has to rhyme with which. You however have managed to maintain form and not lose content. Something I can't do. Or fail to all the time atleast.

I enjoyed this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thanks Di,
You've lightened the load I've been pocketing.
Kudos! ... wish I'd written it :)
Dylan


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Def. One Of My Favorites That You've Written!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really good i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...this feels like poetry with bombs and explosions...wonderful stuff...the didactic tone, i sometimes don't like...but it works wonders here...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lot of action words here. This could work well as a Slam, no? You have a gift. This old fart needs to get used to the way your words roll. Nice poem!
Peace

Posted 13 Years Ago


oooo this is cool! like a beat poem almost! *snaps :) I liked it - ostrich in the title makes it interesting too!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm usually not fond of rhyming poetry, I feel like the content can suffer from being boxed into what word has to rhyme with which. You however have managed to maintain form and not lose content. Something I can't do. Or fail to all the time atleast.

I enjoyed this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is something beautiful something interesting keep it up! I like this so descriptive and different from what people normally read about!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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DiMar4u
DiMar4u

Lodi, NJ



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A Poem by DiMar4u