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A Poem by DiMar4u

early dawn,

breathing life into the day;
yesterdays' dreams
find hope along the way.

punctuality surrenders
slowly whilst contentment
saturates my view.

i haven't the words,
or rather,
i won't give them to you-

© 2014 DiMar4u


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Wow... love the title for this write. The poetic feelings and words in this poem is really nice. Enjoyed this write a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a great piece. I loved the last stanza. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

deep intriguing read, nicely expressed, thank you for your review

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This kinda sounds like my morning~bliss until I find the coffee pot and look at the day ahead, then it gets daunting for a bit, then it gets better again later lol...poetry time :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's right! Don't "give them the words", make them find it for themselves =) Experience!

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have given us quite enough in withholding the words that you do not withhold. This is one of those golden enigmas that are really quite crystalline clear. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 24, 2011
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DiMar4u
DiMar4u

Lodi, NJ



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-you might describe me as a magnanimous perpetual transmuter, or you may simply point and say "..that guy over there-" more..

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