Desire

I've loved this boy ever since we were kids, but he will never know how I truly feel.

Desire

To endure the sensation of your soft lips’ dancing with mine is my only aspiration

I fancy your warm caressing touch tracing circles on my shoulder

And your loving deep whisper that lullabies me to sleep

Oh those profound brown eyes

How do I get lost in your maze so small?

 And those steady arms

Where do I find comfort without them enclosed around me?

I render you in a foolish fantasy of mine

Where I make you laugh…

And where I make you cry

But most of all where I make you love with a love you never fathomed existed

And where I love you with every mile of my heart, body, and soul

You will never apprehend in a lifetime the extent of my love for you

I will never release the fiery passion I mask rooted inside

I am not one to open my mind and display my devotion

But how I would pray to show you my care

Reviews

[AWSklavos]

I hope one day someone feels like that about me. That is some powerful emotion you are expressing. Thank you for sharing your poetry.

[Ren Grace]

As do I :) Thank you!

[Stella Armour]

a true love poem of devotion... much enjoyed Lauren.

[Ren Grace]

Thank you Stella for taking the time and commenting it means so much!

[Stella Armour]

my pleasure..

[Meraki]

That is love, passionate raw true love. It's great not amazing that you captured it in a poem, you have such a talent, awesome poem.

[Ren Grace]

Thank you so much Meraki! Your words mean the world to me :)

[Meraki]

Oh, no thank you for such a great poem

[A. Amos]

I am not one to open my mind and display my devotion
But how I would pray to show you my care

Above lines are killer I feel so much connected with them, thanks for such a share

[Ren Grace]

Wow, thank you so much for your appreciation :) I'm very pleased that you enjoyed my piece!

[A. Amos]

I truly did and you're most welcome

[Erik Daniel]

This is a very beautiful poem. I can feel the passion behind it. Great job!

[Ren Grace]

Thank you!