The Liquidity of Verse

just another meandering

fine mist of words

colored by grammatical powdering

settle upon line and space

neither powder nor liquid

a sense of wonderment

aligns its arc with the verve of enlightenment

on the eve of nature’s unseen adventure

pilgrim

lost in the stars of eyes

I stand with the whispers

of promise at my back

and the shine of penciled mist

before me

copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2012

Reviews

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How enchantingly penned! Beautiful :)

[Audrey Howitt]

Thank you lynn!

[Tina Kline]

What a great poem! I love this. It puts a fun, playful and wonderment of creating with words. A splendid view of the art of writing/

[Audrey Howitt]

Thank you so much Aurora!

[...]

. absolutely exquisite poetry, dear audrey ... my favourite lines are ...

"a sense of wonderment

aligns its arc with the verve of enlightenment

on the eve of nature’s unseen adventure"

[Audrey Howitt]

Thank you so very much! I am glad that you enjoyed this one!

[...]

. you're very, very, very welcome :) ...

[FJ Davis]

"The Liquidity of Verse" is more-than-worthy fulfillment of those "whispers of promise" at your back.
Amazing, Audrey!

[Audrey Howitt]

Thank you Frank!! How are you my friend??

[FJ Davis]

Just fine, thank you, Audrey! Hope you're also doing well. I know your poetry is.

[Audrey Howitt]

I am just coming out of a dry spell--vacation helped!

[†Tracey†]

This unfolds into such a beauty. Isn't it great that after you travel things become fresh and new... this reflects those kinds of moments..

[Leslie Philibert]

A poem with a lot of fine lines, rich with imagery.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Audrey, you are just a master...a master. Unique and beautiful once again.

[Ed Hart]

it's so nice to have you back dusting the page with your magical presence...your words flow like a mountain brook, and clouds dot the sky, and and and

[Kent Smotherman]

I really, really love this piece. The word choice is simply wonderful - first 100 I've given out, just fantastic.

[Audrey Howitt]

I just wanted to thank you! You are very kind and I am honored.

[J. J. Nightingale]

And then the magic begins to take shape .. to each his own expression .. ..

Flows sweet ... Jazz