The Awakening

The Awakening

A Poem by Audrey Howitt
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A poem about . . .

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Tears fall                                    Unfettered dreams

Rivers run                                    Darkness abates

Whispered cries                           Laments unfold

Deepening sorrow                        Alabaster hardens

Sighs fall                                     Breezes soften

Sleep deepens                              Dreams subside

Crevice opens                               Light flits

Swallows me                                 Ears open

Whole                                           Wide

Stillness                                       Stillness



 

                            I am

                          Awake

© 2011 Audrey Howitt


Author's Note

Audrey Howitt
playing with form and duality

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This is very creative and very well written...Good Job

Posted 8 Years Ago


how creative this poem is...delightful to read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is so beautiful...and works well...gorgeous writing..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great format and really beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love the form and the feel of it as i read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hey way kewl me likes a lot :))

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is beautiful Audrey, I have to confess I am not sure if you read these side to side or one column and then the next.......help!

Posted 8 Years Ago


All is duality-duality all is.
You composed your song well, Audrey..
*"I wake to sleep, and take my waking slow"
A reminder of this, is your poem,
Which I loved.

*Theodore Roethke (The waking)


Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 17, 2011
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Tags: poem, poetry, dreaming, awakening, stillness, cries

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Audrey Howitt
Audrey Howitt

Alameda, CA



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I am so happy to be writing! I was an attorney in my previous incarnation. These days, I teach voice mostly, write some and do a little psychotherapy. It seems like a good combination for me. I h.. more..

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