my love: the wilder side

an erotic poem though.. you'll surely enjoy ;)

Chilling night.. and your warm blows...
Can feel the magic with eyes closed...
Rushing breaths.. cant hold them..
Now just stop trying, lets be with the flow...

Its hard to handle, my bursting nerves...
Heartbeats, so loud, m getting bad with words..
holding too tight, or setting me free..
you choose your way, the best it serves..

My love dribbling .. yes, from your eyes..
Soliciting, hustling me to loose my mind!
But my lips wont reveal the secret..
Let time go crazy... just for a while...

Darkness seduce me, my eyes refuse to open,
Dumb clock, just stop, who wants to face the sun!
husshh words, now please you don't interfere..
Our lovely provocative erotic night... has just begun!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautifully sensual and tender, and you bring about the pure joy of passion that too few ever really find. Your words make this world of night come alive.

[Saddam]

Soliciting, hustling me to loose my mind!
But my lips wont reveal the secret..
Let time go crazy... just for a while...
Darkness seduce me, my eyes refuse to open,
Dumb clock, just stop, who wants to face the sun!

It is not as you think but beyond the think. Great poem.

[A. Amos]

Poem from soul and read with heart. I enjoyed it

[Penny]

A naughty erotic piece. Rhyming is ssubtle and the last stanza is the best. Very well.

[Prritiy]

nice one girl.

best wishes

[Gaurav Walia]

Quite a captivating poem. It has an element of eroticism which I really liked... :D

[Divya Punjabi]

thank you ;)

[Gaurav Walia]

Anytime My dear fellow Writer :D

[Trace]

ya just gotta love an erotic night that lasts till the sun come up.

Enjoy, and enjoyed.

Trace

[Divya Punjabi]

thank you dear :)

[RainDancer1997]

I'm still a virgin honestly but I can't lie and say that doesn't sound like a wonderful night lol:) Great poem:)

[Divya Punjabi]

I've just turned 20.. and ofcourse a virgin like you ;) :P thanxx for appreciating.. its purely a random thought... I don't even have a boyfriend lol! :)

[RainDancer1997]

I have one but some can be trouble lol. Luckily he's still a very in too and girl why not Ur pretty. I would a thought u had one:-)

[Divya Punjabi]

thank you so much for the compliment... i hope i'll get one soon :)