audrey and holly

this is sort of a self portait in words.

black and white images tango
shadow and light dance
to make the movie of me.
there is suspense, but i know
the outcome of the chance
so really no mystery
detached as i veiw
things that should touch
dont quite seem to reach
no sense of loss but i am loose
deliberately slow in the rush
listening but not hearing the speech
wondering just when the observed
and the casual voyeur coalesce
to become beautiful fusion
separate entites merged
the sum of the two is less
the difference but better the union.

Reviews

[Breezie Kae]

Nice write. :D

[Wolfwind Words]

Sounds alot like two people in one mind, each trying to be in power. And when they come together neither one likes the other. Its a really cool poem. I love the imagery and the flow is really good. I really like the black and white images doing the tango!. That was a cool visual! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!