tragedy

im not really killing myself. i just watch a bad emorific movie whata downer that was huh...

i hate when the past comes around and bites you where it hurts

now there driving my bro in a herse

im sitting here thinking why

and it makes me wanna cry

but i got to be strong

but the pain has been hurting for so long

i cant stand it

so F it

 with this knife i say goodbye

with 3 tears i shall die

 

Reviews

[Irene]

the last 2 lines!!! Chills.

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Oh wow that was sad:( haha

[Rachael32123]

OMG I didn't see the movie part for awhile so I freaked out thinking ur bro died and ur gonna kill yourself!! AHHH haha.

[Mr.Cardigan]

yes i do tomislav thats where i got my insiration for that line

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Good poem, but I feel like you should add a few lines to make the transition between wanting to fight and wanting to die better.
Btw, do you listen to Hollywood Undead? "with 3 tears I shall die" reminded me of Johnny 3 Tears.

[Perfect Mistake]

What a lovely sad poem! I liked it (no im not saying that i like your pain or anything) anyway good work :3

[hopelessromantic]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww im sorry for your pain

[......]

this is so sad, but so well expressed

[xSamilynnx]

dude you dont have to try your just naturally weird o.o..... sad but really good... nice job

[Mr.Cardigan]

thanks i try