(wishing to hide)

he holds so much power and i dont think he knows.

Messages not responded to

Cries landing on deaf ears

And questions left unanswered.

 

These are the reasons a heart cracks in front of this computer

This is why the heart doubts all previous events and apologies

This is why the heart is scared and wants to run

Without a clue where to run to.

 

How you can manage to do this to me

Without ever saying anything

Is a mystery to me,

Call it paranoia

Call it self-esteem issues

Or anything else you may.

 

But hun,

You hurt me without saying anything

You scare me when you don’t answer

You make me doubt what I have been told

And you make me believe the insecurities I hold.

Author's Note

he really truely does.
thoughts ideas? someting i just threw together like 30 seconds ago

Reviews

[CharlieO]

This is a good write - it has the beginnings of a great write though.
For me you have truely managed to capture your raw emotions, take a step back, add some imagery and use your senses, the reader will become even more involved in your emotions as a result.
This is well written - an acievement given how quickly you put it together.

[Dug]

i like the honesty of the piece.
although as someone usually more on the silent side, sometimes i just don't know what to say to people. it doesn't mean i've forgotten about them. insecurity goes both directions.

[The Mad Prophet]

Very good, very well writen, and even flows with your emotions. I do believe if he ever read any of these you may incite emotion in him, sometimes thats what is needed. Emotion is Energy. Energy hold the World like Glue. Once the Energy feels his being, he can react the way you need him too. If he knew he did these things to you, would he have done it?

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

"youll have a hard time convincing anyone else your worth their time if you dont believe it yourself."
i heard that somewhere.
not sure where.