The Dragon Escapades of Sir Erudite. pt 1

The Dragon Escapades of Sir Erudite. pt 1

A Poem by SirErudite

The first installment of the Dragon Escapades

Now, where do I start? With a poem is most appropriate. 
Atop a lonely hill in the early dawn Sir Barney Erudite sits and stifles a yawn. 
The mist stretches over the mountains of brown black and gold. 
The yellow plains wave in the wind as if to say hello.
Sir Erudite enjoyed his nap which he took many times a day. 
Then he contemplated the evening sky but had nothing to say.
he'd been traveling and riding for twelve rainy days.
Before he found peace and relished in sun's rays. 
And then he knew without further ado, he must be on his way. 
He mounted his pony and cast eyes at the town.
And cast the bleak westward clouds a frown. 
looked to the ground that had been his grassy bed.
then through his visor he spoke "There are dragons ahead"
Then he galloped off at the speed of sound
for he could not be stopped with dragons around. 

© 2012 SirErudite

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This is awesome! It paints a picture and has enough description. One thing I noticed was you said "then" quite often. But I like his name and his hunger for adventure, or at least for slaying a dragon. Good job! :D

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