Walk with me

Walk with me

A Poem by SirErudite

Walk with me my love,

Through streets of cobblestone,

My hand, please take hold of,

Do not leave me alone.

Walk with me my love,

You put me in a daze,

My hand, Don't let go of,

You set my heart ablaze.

Walk with me my love,

For these last few days,

My life, it is the end of,

But your hand stays.

© 2012 SirErudite

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Wow, this is so sweet!! I like the simple style of writing you have. It's beautiful. The last line is absolutely the best "but your hand stays". Great job:)

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bangkok, Christian , Thailand

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