Tempting Darkness

Tempting Darkness

A Poem by Doctor Deathstab
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Written with Fairy Tales

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I’m in a haunted castle where vampires and demons live inside
Frightened and hungry, I wonder how I will survive
I need a brave soul to come into this chamber
Take me out of here , my body I surrender

There is no white knight to save a damsel in distress
You ventured to my castle and got yourself into this mess
You’re a little faker that seems scared on the surface
But I know you’re here for a less innocent purpose

Oh my, how will I get by with~out a knight in shining armour
Must I use my seductive charms, and lay my body in your arms
So you will let me out of this hell and all of this death I smell
I promise to be on my knees giving my soul to you to please

You came but you can’t leave. You can’t bribe me.
I own your body and soul, so now you get to ride me.
This is heaven to me though some call it hell.
Now you’ll call it home because you’re under my spell.
You left a village of peasants thinking that you’d rebel.
Now you’re helpless before me, and you will show and tell.

Yes, Master, as you say, I may become very happpy this way
I'm digging your spell it taste sweet like honey, but don't I deserve
A trinket of money, a diamond or pearl to show that you care
Or are there others you are willing to share, please Master I must
Have a jewel, I've always been poor in this Country you rule
 

© 2009 Doctor Deathstab


Author's Note

Doctor Deathstab
Red is me. Black is Fairy Tales

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i liked it all until the very last stanza... perhaps the 'interrupt' was intentional even though it still blends... i was in wanting of a different phrase of ending.. dig the red though. viva noir.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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