'run my friend'

no-where leads to eternity, but go on

run my friend

yet the journey awaits for a precious traveler

run my friend

the time has been granted, so hurry

run my friend

to other side and back again

run my friend

soon the collision awaits

no more running my friend

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

no more running, a moment to submit to no-where.
So many journey's and travels I have been on that have left me as a whole so restless.
I also see death when I read this over.

[Robert]

That opening line is really good and original, " no-where leads to eternity, but go on." Interesting piece You have penned Yanina. The ending wraps the entire poem up with what will happen... the collision. Well done.

[Yanina McKnight]

Thank you for your review! I wanted the end of my poem to have a suspenseful conclusion!

[AaronFreitas]

You can run but only for so long before you hit things head on. Sometimes the best thing to do is just face whatever it is and not tire running away :) Nice write :D

[Yanina McKnight]

Yes, I believe the most important aspects of life is to face one's own reality even if the outcome hurts. Running away creates more pain. I agree with you and thank you for reading my work!

[B]

I believe now in facing everything
Even the uncomfortable things

ITs character building
no running

Amazing write

[Yanina McKnight]

Thank you!
Yes, facing everything head-one builds great character.