Silence

Silence

A Poem by dreaming dame
"

A situation I'm in right now.

"

"Silence is the answer", I'm told.

Thought friendship was forever,

'till we were old.

 

Words cannot state,

My confusion and loss,

but I feel no hate.

 

So, silent am I,

strong I will be.

No, I will not cry.

 

The day will come

for the world to see;

that like me, there are none.

© 2012 dreaming dame


Author's Note

dreaming dame
:) I feel powerful writing this. I guess what the description said.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
No, I actually don't even feel like crying, nor am I depressed! So ha! in
poetry's face! :) Yea, I'm wierd. :)

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Amazing work. its quite sad.
XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good! sorry about your loss.. Im sure it´s rough. slay those words on paper and you´ll inspire others to endure their losses! keep writing! canada.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It speaks a volume..... Powerful it is

Posted 12 Years Ago


Silence is the best answer!! Excellent write:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is nice work. Silence says always more than a thousand words, this is sometimes the best and most wise choise. If the silent wind blows right, and will refind you, people will always remember you as the most powerful person, even when silence was there for a long time. And trust in between it. Truly beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, i can feel you feeling powerfull, so powerfull these words are, coming off the screen and attacking me, om nom nom. *they eat my face and i feel... low again. Like i need to go write another poem to make me feel like I still can* Intimidating... and sad-thought-inspiring.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Triumph! I like this! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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dreaming dame
dreaming dame

Southern Ontario, Canada



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I'm 18 now, finally the age I dreamed of being as a kid lol. Life has shown that lessons can be taught in a very difficult way.. but I believe in finding the little things of beauty in everyday life.. more..

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