Lost

Lost

A Poem by dreaming dame
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Depression

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Thought I saw a path,
But now it's gone.
There is no right way.
I've been tossed.
Cut off.
I'm lost.

There's nothing here...Or here!
Was there ever?
Was I just in a high?
Hallucinating the good,
Ignoring the bad.
... Help. Anyone?
I'm lost.

© 2012 dreaming dame


Author's Note

dreaming dame
Yea, umm. Nothing related to the poem... Silent. So you all know.
Critiscism welcome. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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my poem WINDS might give u something about what u re asking for


Posted 12 Years Ago


Realy good. Im permanently lost

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hallucinating the good,
Ignoring the bad.

Good write:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh, don't we all know that lost feeling. "Someone! Make my decisions for me! I'm just gonna sit here feeling lost!" That's me. Lol, i dont know if that's how you feel but that is deffinately me. Nice one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You could have pulled this out of my head on some days. I know that "lost" feeling all too well in my life.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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dreaming dame
dreaming dame

Southern Ontario, Canada



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I'm 18 now, finally the age I dreamed of being as a kid lol. Life has shown that lessons can be taught in a very difficult way.. but I believe in finding the little things of beauty in everyday life.. more..

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