let

I

just

want

to

be in

love

and

happy.

not

confused.

not

hurt.

not

stressed.

just

happy.

Reviews

[Amy R]

A very nice write ...
Holds great meaning.
-Amy

[Amy R]

A very nice write ...
Holds great meaning.
-Amy

[Robert Trakofler]

I spent a lot of time looking for happiness I searched under every rock, tree stump every burrow, and furrow I could find and never found it:( All along I discovered later it was right under my fedora:/

[h d e rushin]

Yep! that's where it always is and where it belongs. self love is the forthright straight-away to true happiness. Thanks for understanding my friend. daan

[mattavelli]

Hello, Dana! :)
I don’t think women are built to be content with relationships. I think women are nurturers, and as such, they expect the nurturee, be it a child or relationship, to develop and eventually outgrow them; and if it doesn’t, it’s a disappointment. Im most likely way off base though. Haha
I hope you find what you’re looking for.

[h d e rushin]

I don't think that no single person (at least no single America person) is meant to be content. I mean, even in marriage people expect a certain "niche" in which to hide their specific desires and wants. Finding someone who truly understands you is so 1950's. I'm sure that it can be done but only after subtle discrimination. Thanks love for your insight. dana

[LJW]

As do I.

I've been gone with writers block for a few years. Just recently came back here. So glad to see you're still writing!

[h d e rushin]

I took a few months off also. But I write, at least, a poem a day. Mostly rushed out and uncertain poems caught at the exact moment when uncertainty becomes atomic. 2021 killed so much inspiration in all of us. Thanks for stopping by and happy new year to you.. dana

[no tell writer]

I would love to be totally happy myself, i enjoyed this piece

[h d e rushin]

I'm still searching! It may not ever happen for me, but I haven't given up completely. The new year brings new hope for both of us...thanks for your words....dana

[emmajoy]

Perhaps there's no 'just' to being happy any more than 'just' being in love. Bur even feeling that way, you still drip thoughts on the vellum briefly but with great eloquence and emotion, dana

Do hope life is being kind to you nonetheless Keep safe, please,

[h d e rushin]

thank you love and Happy New Year to you. dana

[barleygirl]

Your poem reminds me that I stopped wishing for this a long time ago. Not in a bad way, tho. It's better not to be yearning . . . seeing that my happiness is right here, in everything I DO enjoy (((HUGS)))

[h d e rushin]

I think poetry has the onus of a more inward ontology. It tries to be real even with your responsibilities and burdens are on full display ; And yet refuses the priori argument that happiness is never theoretical but involves either yourself or someone else. The old folks use to tell me that if your looking for it, you may not ever find it. Love is too exclusive to ever be just "found". But hurt is almost always intentional. I want to find out why hurt happens so easily and love happens so suddenly. Thanks for your strong words love. dana

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, the dream of many. Unfortunately not always realized. The staccato lines are powerful, Dana. Lydi**

[h d e rushin]

thank you love....I know....so very different coming from me....But just a person thinking out loud...that's all.....dana

[Crown M.]

Happy is first with self and love will follow.

[h d e rushin]

I too prioritize happy.....first and foremost. Then everything should follow....which is not always the case. Thanks for your order my friend....dana

[Crown M.]

You're welcome!