Quando erimus?

When will we be?

When will that day be 

when my eyes feast on you 

when they have their fill 

In person I will experience your radiance and splendor 

saturated in beauties glow 

your image is an ocular delight to behold  

I am drunk from the sight of you.

 

When will we delight ourselves in each other’s arms 

your heartbeat felt in my chest 

laying together till we beat as one 

and I feel your pulse elevate 

as I speak sweetness above a whisper in your ear 

secrets for only you to hear.  

 

When will my thirst for your lips be quenched 

I have crawled through isolations desert 

my throat is parched and cracked 

send your rains soon 

let there be a monsoon of kisses that cover me.

 

When is the question time will answer 

 

Hope is the force that carries 

 

Faith is the foundation I stand on  

 

Love is the fire that warms

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i read this thinking about a certain special person in my life. yes, i cant wait for our next meeting. and these words capture all those thoughts i have of her. it was written as eloquently as your other work, but i see a bit cheekiness here as well. it's something that gets you in the mood.

[Dave W.]

Ern, my dude, I hope this year is good to you, Thank you for the kind words.

[Beren]

damn, my heart is burning with longing for someone who is not here right now. sir, i didn't even think i could feel anything for a long time but i assure you this has left an opening in my heart. a poet has done his job successfully.
i like your use of latin titles, i will definitely check out the others. you are one of the few "really good" writers on this site. let us carry your pain together, let us suffer the longing together.
thanks for sharing

[Dave W.]

Thank you for the kind words, passion can be intense and this was born of that emotion, I just hate the longing that comes from waiting for the hearts desires to be fulfilled.

[Beren]

If the longing is too much, put it on paper. A person can have difficulty carrying two hearts in one. You don't have to carry it, leave some of it to poems and songs.

[Dave W.]

I pour my soul out in prose, with out my writing I would go crazy from everything that builds up.

[red93]

Sounding good Dave and nice and positive and upbeat. Plenty of fine imagery in this well-constructed Piece. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Dave W.]

Thank you Red, for the kind review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a monsoon of kisses sounds pretty darn romantic....nothing more intimate than a kiss.
j.

[Dave W.]

Facts, have a great day.