Take Me Back

Take Me Back

A Poem by Duke Teager

I was, for once, at complete peace
And for once, there was a silence
And then, it was as if we were weightless
As if we never carried a single burden
There's no rule to hold you down, in here
There are no words to explain the freedom
No insecurity or concern on anything near
Were none and no need for any leader
We were so joyful and at play
We were one and we were equal
I was so excited and ready to stay
I wish I had never awakened.

© 2012 Duke Teager


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brilliant! carefree, commitment-free, in the womb, after death, ready to engage conception, after disengaging mortal contract.. a lot run through my meek brain as I read this short stanza.. simply superb!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Duke Teager

10 Years Ago

you got it! cheers bro
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Effector Prime

10 Years Ago

this ain't no just another poem here, by just another poet.. you're THE poet mate. an ancient one. y.. read more

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Duke Teager
Duke Teager

Brisbane, QLD, Australia



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