A Foreign Language

A Foreign Language

A Poem by Amorette Duvannes

Our curse is pebbled in years, rolling
Away from the valley of riding
For too long, too fast. 
Our lustre clenched in the tide
Of a giddy child, solemnly
Smoking on dead fumes.
Today I saw a blind widow bite 
Onto gravestones of marble and granite, and flinch
When her son's name came off in her fingers.
Tomorrow I will see a blind widow 
Elucidating the shadows we all believed too
Righteous to ever knock on our doors.
This is how we say life. So-ro-row. 
Like a gannet's hurling tongue, a throaty 
Haunt at the back of a gnat's throat
Blood running silver like lives for pennies,
Rich, bitter, bitter, rich. And read it like you were taught the alphabet, 
Back-to-front, like the human spine
If God had a will He would've brought it to Earth by now.
Instead, we are a daunting dream, compassing his
Extra time, the clock-hands waving compulsory
To the mandatory man. Yesterday I saw the widow
Dream, and time revolted in and out upon itself
And the human throat buzzed it's final cry
Today, we see the fly's tongue grown crochet onto the window
Pane, saying it's sorries, saying it's goodbyes. Zeus looked down in spite and
Flashed his might, and his foot, his foot!
Tomorrow. Tomo-ro-row. 
Like a human last breath, like a mammal last fear.
The human carcass vacates it's solemn shell. All is well. 

© 2013 Amorette Duvannes


Author's Note

Amorette Duvannes
As always, I only want help to improve.. any advice, any tips, or if you liked it, Hell, my ego could do with fluffing up! There are so few people willing to spare a few minutes of their day to help, so I appreciate anything you may be willing to give. Even if you hated it, I mean -- it took time. And that's maybe the nicest thing you could give me, in any variant!

--Ophelia //
Abbey

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