Remember Me

When I drown in my own tears,
I hope you remember me.
When I build my own fire to destroy my own body,
I hope you remember me.
When blood is dripping from my body,
I hope you remember me.
When I fly up into a tornado and am thrown from it,
I hope you remember me.
I hope when you are older you still remember what I was like.
I hope when you grow up you will not be as sad.
Just try to remember me the best way you can.
The impossible can happen.
You will never know.
So just remember me.
I know it will hurt,
But remember me.
All the good times we shared.
Just remember I'm the one who built you.
Remember me when I'm gone.
I did love you,
But I was the one who died for you.
I took the bullet for you.
Remember me because I saved your life.
You would have died if I hadn't saved you.
I hope you remember me,
Because if you die I will remember you.

Author's Note

What do you think? Reviews.

Reviews

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

This is interesting, and something i would tell my friends. Because i would take a bullet for them and i'd hope they would take one from me.

I like how you started of with i hope you remember me after every statement and then start with i hope you remember me when...and then stop...and wait until the last line to said i hope you will remember me, because i will remember you.

This is a good poem. You do have one typo "When blood is dripping for my body." I think it's supposed to be "When blood is dripping from my body."

[Thomas Fleet]

I think it's a good, well-thought out and emotional poem.
You definitely did a good job at conveying your emotions to the reader.
Thanks for sharing, Angela. :)

[Hippy]

i like it i feel you should go deeaper tho make them stronger like the lasy words of your life i mean this is good i just wanted more