I'm Tired

This is dedicated to someone that really hurt me. And if you know me well you do know who it is.

I'm tired,
Of you pretending.
I'm tired,
Of you lying.
I'm tired,
Of you saying what you wanted to say.
I'm tired,
Of the pain you cause.
I'm tired,
Of you breaking my heart into pieces.
I'm tired,
Of all of this crap.
Jump off a bridge if you have to.
You aren't worth it anymore.
I'm tired of you hurting me.
Maybe you should get out of my life.
I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.
I'm tired of this pain.
I'm tired of this lie you keep putting me on.
Why would you do that?
To protect your own hide or mine?
I'm tired of your face.
It's ugly and disgusting to me now.
I'm tired of all of your crap.
I will throw you off the Brooklyn Bridge.
I will make you hit your face on a locker.
Or something harder to make you bleed.
This is for you little dweeb.
Now get out of my life because I'm tired of you. 

Author's Note

Dedicated to one person I trusted most. Then he had to rip my heart out of my chest. My favorite line of this is I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Wow, a really powerful write! Your emotions came through so strongly in this piece, and I really felt the anger and frustration behind your words. There was certainly a sense of pain and heartache in your poem, and I thought that you did a great job in expressing this in the beginning, particularly with the repetition of the line 'I'm tired,'. Great write!
~PaperHearts

[maryjaneuy]

Very emotional. Nice read. I can feel the pain. Aside from some errors, it's good. :D

[Bette]

angry.... i like it.

[Hippy]

i like it its very in your face and angry to me i just suggest dont talk to the person no matter how much you love talking to people

[Thomas Fleet]

Sad and graphic poem filled with anger and heartbreak. :(
It's great, but depressive, as always, Angela. :P
Good job, good job. Keep writing and never stop.

[Kristen]

This is powerful, strong, and emotional. Good write!

- S.T.

[Dillon Cotter]

A sad write however, the detail and feeling is in every line. The passion and feel of your heart is well understood as you express your emotions throughout the poem. Its good!

-Will

[Holly-Marie]

Well that's telling them =)
A very powerful poem, full of emotion but very well thought out and written.
Loved it.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is strong and straight to the point. I like the anger and story in your words. So many powerful statements made the poem very good. I like the ending.
Coyote

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i've felt this way numerous times

[Manda]

wow i have felt this was so many times.... i absolutely hate this feeling! ugh... well you did a nice job expressing this!