Joy out of the Blue

A Senryu for Arzel Joy

Joy fills all her poems,

Hope and faith, desire and doubt,

Flows out of the Blue

Author's Note

I thought of naming this 'Ode to Joy' but that had already been used. Then I thought of 'Senryu for Blue' but I went with the title Joy out of the Blue, as that is what her poems do for her many fans. Blue, if you read this, please note that you are greatly respected and loved here and we all eagerly await your return.

Reviews

[Blue]

That's a creative title, Eddie. When I thought of a WC pseudonym, I haven't realized how "Blue" is in contrast to my name "Joy". :) I love the pair "desire" and "doubt". You have chosen the appropriate words that fill my poetry. ;) Thank you so much again!

[Eddie Davis]

You are welcome, I actually started a 'regular' poem but tried to turn it into a senryu which I wasn't too pleased with. I finally posted the 'regular' poem and I hope you read that, as it is more of a tribute to you I think then these three rather basic lines.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice tribute to Blue. She's a young brilliant poet in this site and I'm so proud of her.
Nice senryu, Eddie.

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you, Dhaye, you are another brilliant poet that deserves a well-done poem to honor you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're calling me "brilliant" but I don't know if I am already in that level. LOL
Anyway, thank you Senryu King. .................. :)

[Eddie Davis]

"Senryu King' ??? Oh, now that is funny!!!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I have only few senryus and all are so emotional so they are now hidden inside my books.
You're senryus are countless now...so I gave you the title. LOL.

[Eddie Davis]

You are too kind. Mine are very primitive.

[Blue]

Wow. You, two, are getting pretty along with each other. :)

Thank you, Ate. Thank you, Eddie.

[Eddie Davis]

You are welcome, Blue, you deserve it.