Red eyes

Red eyes

A Poem by Eddie Davis
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A Senryu of deadlines

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A deadline awaits

All night I work on writing,

sleep is but a dream,

© 2014 Eddie Davis


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I like the picture! Sometimes a situation is best 'slept upon'! A very evocative haiku. Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
That's something nerve-racking, Eddie. Too much work can pressure us. Hope next time, you can finish your assignments before the deadline. Lack of sleep can be the cause of many health problems. LOL.

Nice vent in 17 syllables.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

10 Years Ago

Thanks, you're right, sleep is essential to good health.
Poor thing. Sounds stressful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

10 Years Ago

thanks for reading it.

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Added on April 24, 2014
Last Updated on April 24, 2014
Tags: Writing, sleep, deadlines

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Eddie Davis
Eddie Davis

Springfield, MO



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