Helplessness

A Senryu for all those who hurt so deep and feel so alone

Carnage all around,

Only band-aids can I give,

And hold those who bleed

Reviews

[Blue]

Meaningful despite its brevity. Nice.

[Eddie Davis]

Hi Blue! Thanks for reading it.

[Goat]

Wow, this is a great piece! It's so short yet at the same time it holds so much meaning! In just 3 lines you told a wonderfully sad story that I think we can all relate to, there's not much else we can do when someone is hurting besides hold them and try to help. Great job, this poem is amazing!

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Eddie, you are a blessing to the people closer to you. It's so heartfelt that you have sympathy to those who are hurting.
This is a nice senryu.
Please keep that spirit in you. God bless!

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you, Dhaye, you are very kind.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

It's you.
You're welcome.