Proclamation

How to battle frustrations.

Sometimes in an obligation,

You will fall on complication,

And despite determination,

Your failure brings condemnation,

 

Dealing with some Consternation,

Feeling shame and aggravation,

Wearing down determination,

At others excitation,

 

Those who try manipulation,

Without other consideration,

Needing divine revelation,

And renewed consecration,

 

And with more evaluation,

Dispensing from speculation,

Loving without hesitation,

Turning from our provocation,

 

All are equal in creation,

Despite status or our station,

Under grace’s dispensation,

through God’s wise observation,

 

Filling hearts with inspiration,

Promoting evaluation,

Brothers in cooperation,

As a holy congregation

 

It’s the end of all frustration,

When we have the revelation,

We can leave trepidation,

Unified in Christ’s salvation

Reviews

[catwoman]

i really love the way you rhymed each line..i really like the poem :)

[Eddie Davis]

Thanks for reading it.

[Daydreamer]

This poem further reminds why I favor the English Language of all languages. I love what you've done here, Eddie, Well done!

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you for your kind words.

[yuki]

this is really good. I love how theres a lot of good words and how you really rhymed with it that's really hard to do in my opinion. well done.

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you for reading it.

[yuki]

my pleasure

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is great, Eddie. What I love about your poems is they always give lessons to the readers. We can win all battles through God's help and guidance.
This has a perfect rhyming.
You are an awesome poet, Eddie. Keep it up!

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you, Dhaye, you are most kind.

[Josh Dollar]

Very true words. I love the lines "It’s the end of all frustration,When we have the revelation, We can leave trepidation, Unified in Christ’s salvation"
well done.

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you for reading it.