Fade Away

A 'stair poem' of despair and hope.

Fade Away

 

Fade away,

Into the grey,

How could I stay,

Another day,

 

I have no way,

Nothing to say,

Though I may,

Kneel and pray,

 

As I pray,

Which I may,

Voices say,

Christ’s the way,

 

Strive this day,

Live and stay,

And watch the grey,

Fade away

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Excellent! It is not easy to think of words that rhyme from the first verse down to the last one but you did!
I wonder why I missed to read this one.
This is a wonderful poem about hope in times of despair. Yes, anything could be lost and you will fail, but while there is hope, everything has a chance to be regained.

[Eddie Davis]

Thanks, I appreciate your comments especially.

[Mary Helda]

Great piece...faith can enable you move mountains..

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you.

[613]

Although I believe in a different Creator than you do, the message is still the same. Nicely done!

- Brittney

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you.

[613]

You're welcome.

[catwoman]

it was really awesome...i like it :)

[Eddie Davis]

thank you.

[~]

Keep telling these to God, and your gray will firework into a million pieces :)

[Eddie Davis]

thanks for reading it.

[Jamestown]

Absolutely fantastic piece of work, awesome from top to bottom!
Great flowing piece with great message, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Jamestown]

Your welcome! PTL