Life worth living

Life worth living

A Poem by Edward Lancheister
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life and living

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Open my eyes at the start of the day
One bold step and I’m off on my journey
Sunshine and lights upon my skin
I can feel the warm embrace within

People pass by, they meet and greet
Sharing in conversation & spirit 
Each day holds a great vision to claim
Yes, today is a beautiful day, I say
So let nothing be wasted or vain

The sun and moon, they rise and set
Silver stars shimmer across the dark sky
Courage and faith are the center of hope
Make troubles vanish like a fire’s smoke  

There’s certain to be battle, a war to be won
No day leaves time to surrender
Pain brings strength, sorrow brings love
And charity brings joy- the greatest gift ever

Life’s too short to be taken for granted
Or wasted without hesitation or thought
Wish not for its ending for this is just beginning 
Take a bold step into your journey
With me. 

© 2014 Edward Lancheister


Author's Note

Edward Lancheister
Life worth living

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Many people like this poem. People are seeking encouragement in a depressing world. I like this stanza the best:
"There’s certain to be battle, a war to be won
No day leaves time to surrender
Pain brings strength, sorrow brings love
And charity brings joy- the greatest gift ever"

Very good insight, Edward, about life's push and pull, tug of war.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you very much for the encouraging review, life is too short to be miss



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Nicely written, and some deep truth, all in a readable package. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you Noel for stop by and read the poem
an amazing write with very beautiful ending n positive attitude for life....Life’s too short to be taken for granted.... welldone


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you, cause there are so much beautiful things in life :)
Nice thoughts well presented in a touching poem.
Good one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review and gladly to say :)
Amazingly beautiful that was...
Lovely poem with a lovely message...Well penned :)
-Love Anahat :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you Anahat, glad you could get the positive message about life :)
Astounding!!!!!
This is beautiful and so full of meaning!
I love your word choice and the message you conveyed was priceless. :)
Superb pen friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you Chelsea, life is too short to be missed
Konigin

9 Years Ago

You're welcome Edward! :)
Yeah. Life is too special
tho i have just started to get to know you.. this is the best one of yours i have read yet (you are improving the grammar).. i love the positive thread throughout .. the foundations of faith and courage and positive thinking and experience are wonderful!... should be posted on my minds eye to read every morning ... it has put me in a better frame of mind today .. thank you for sharing :)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you very much for the courage to write much more better
Excellent write, bro! Very encouraging point of view which bleeds through your writing in such a vibrant way, inspiring those who are greeted with it. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

Thank you for have stop by and give review. Your words encourage me to write much more better
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Thank you for you poem Edward; I love poetry but I have never attempted to write any I seem to be more interested in just writing. How long did it take you to write this or any poem? I was touched by your words as I am familiar with pain, sorrow and disappointment along this journey called life. I was encouraged with your words how pain brings strength, sorrow brings love and how short life is and should not be taken for granted or wasted. Thanks again Edward. Arthur Thomas

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

such a great joy that my poem could encourage people, there so many wonderful things in life even in.. read more
indeed life is worth living with how one envision life as it is , moving time and space, events come and go, memories remind , partaking in the heart of every person who passed and contributed and it is a highly inspiring poetry piece, well written piece. Two thumbs up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review, glad you could get the message between the words


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Added on July 9, 2014
Last Updated on July 15, 2014
Tags: love, life, faith, broken, experience, lost, hopeless, mental illness, psychology, hope

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Edward Lancheister
Edward Lancheister

E.L Celestial, United Kingdom



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simply person that like to write from the things i see according to my notes from travelling and research, try to convey things that capture by eyes, camera or feel by sense. for me poem is more than .. more..

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