Traffic Light

Traffic Light

A Poem by Elizabeth J. Gelinger
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Winter Haiku

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You drove me that night
Wishing for red traffic lights
Never enough time

© 2016 Elizabeth J. Gelinger


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I do understand this poem. Sometimes seconds become important. Very nice use of words dear Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Never enough time... I like this poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


Concise words based on a thought.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like what you wrote very much, you made it very relatable!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I am starting to see a pattern with you poetry; it is concise and meaningful. You take a unique approach with a haiku. Commonly, a haiku focuses on nature where you center around "human nature." From this short stanza, I get an image of a couple riding home after a date, not wanting to get out of the car because they want to spend more time together. Simple and elegant, indeed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


there are many means to tis poem. i love it. keep up the great work!!!!


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Posted 5 Years Ago


Short poems are always my favorite because you can make an impactful statement with just a few words. It's also not easy to do, so I applaud you for taking the risk and doing it. The first two sentences are so powerful, it definitely makes you think. And, to be able to make someone think by just stating two sentences is a talent.

Posted 5 Years Ago


never enough time for anything is there?

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love this. There is many meanings with this piece. :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pretty neat idea for a write. In so many instances that pass by so fast in life we need more red lights, Valentine

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on October 2, 2016
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Tags: traffic, light, poetry, poem, love, unrequited, haiku, winter, never, enough, time

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Elizabeth J. Gelinger
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