JUST LET GO

When things don't work out do not sit there feeling sorry for yourself ...just dust yourself off and let go!

               JUST LET GO!

Let go of sorrow and woe >>>

   The tide has come in, cleansing the shore

             of bad dreams.

    dreams that took back all of what was given,

    when all your life you have striven.

Sharks are out there: they are all around,

so keep your feet firmly on the ground!

   Confidence in all you woo ***

   Banish every putrid air, success be the aim in view.

With a broken heart to repair x x x

just deep breathe fresh ozone air!

Let go of the cruel past >>>

cherish only good and decent memories that last!

Created @ 12.15pm on Wednesday 15th April 2015

Author's Note

Retrieved from the archives...in a 'spring clean'

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

not only do i like the theme here...i like the way you brought in the perfect metaphor of cleaning out pollution....as cleaning out that which is polluting our hearts and minds...and making us feel the
awful scent of unhappiness, of defeat.
excellent write.
j.

[kitty]

Thank you Jacob for this visit and for showing an interest in this piece. As you can see I have gone into the archives to 'air' old unpublished pieces. Time for a spring clean eh!