Soul Searching.

Soul Searching.

A Poem by mess of gorgeous chaos

I enjoy going soul searching
I find God's creations so complex and intriguing
but also easy to doubt
No matter the amount of time spent thinking or people watching,
humans are one concept I am so faraway
from figuring out.

© 2013 mess of gorgeous chaos


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Ok, Again I do Agree with you. humans're the creation of god but due to their bad activities we're all moving or escaping from them or ever from our inner life as well bcoz///we're too humans. This write makes me crazy about the life thinking more about it in deep. Soul searching title's well fitted in this piece bcoz, what i figured out here is, "We're lost in the world and our soul's not remained pure as it was few decades earlier" but we're still pure ffrom our inside, we ccan hide from un-pure soul if we want to and can live and can be mix in the group of pure souls.

Yeh, i do agree with you, "God's creation is complex, God's made too many humans/people and few of 'em're so complicated and they're out of our mind to understand 'em what actually they want, what actually they want from life, what actually the aim of their life is and so on...This's the Best write of youse one from your other writes i must say bxoz, it's forced me to think on it and start work on it to write one...Once again you've got me by your this piece. Well done, great job. Keep posting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mess of gorgeous chaos

10 Years Ago

Thanks once again! It means so much to me that this made you think and start writing your own piece,.. read more


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Ok, Again I do Agree with you. humans're the creation of god but due to their bad activities we're all moving or escaping from them or ever from our inner life as well bcoz///we're too humans. This write makes me crazy about the life thinking more about it in deep. Soul searching title's well fitted in this piece bcoz, what i figured out here is, "We're lost in the world and our soul's not remained pure as it was few decades earlier" but we're still pure ffrom our inside, we ccan hide from un-pure soul if we want to and can live and can be mix in the group of pure souls.

Yeh, i do agree with you, "God's creation is complex, God's made too many humans/people and few of 'em're so complicated and they're out of our mind to understand 'em what actually they want, what actually they want from life, what actually the aim of their life is and so on...This's the Best write of youse one from your other writes i must say bxoz, it's forced me to think on it and start work on it to write one...Once again you've got me by your this piece. Well done, great job. Keep posting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mess of gorgeous chaos

10 Years Ago

Thanks once again! It means so much to me that this made you think and start writing your own piece,.. read more

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Added on July 29, 2013
Last Updated on August 7, 2013
Tags: soul, souls, searching, people, God, thinking

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