Hello. Goodbye.

Hello, love.

I just wanted to make sure you know that the truth will always find its way to beat into your heart.

 

Love,

I just wanted to make sure you know that the song in your head is never the wrong melody.

 

Love,

I want you to know that I don’t want to leave, but I have to.

 

Love,

I hope your heart can still beat after this and that your head will still play the sweetest songs.

 

Goodbye, love.

 

Reviews

[emipoemi]

ooooooooh! It was all going so well until the last "hope" line kind of ruined it by seemingly being an iteration of the second one. It's otherwise sooooo good. Just fix up that last line. Make it something a bit a bit different and juicy to end on a powerful note before the "goodbye". Simply amazing otherwise! Short and powerful. Well done!