Love the Rain

Love the Rain

A Poem by elodie

You want it perfect

Sunny days

With smiles

But you’re wrong

Learn how to open

 The window

When it rains

If you hide the tears

You can’t breathe

And there is no joy

In suffocating


--Elodie Malaika 

© 2018 elodie


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I am a huge fan of the rain, as it seems you are as well. I think it is important to embrace things that are not "perfect". In many ways the rain is freeing. I could relate to this poem, your reflections really capture a truth I believe in. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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elodie

5 Years Ago

Thank you!



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I am a huge fan of the rain, as it seems you are as well. I think it is important to embrace things that are not "perfect". In many ways the rain is freeing. I could relate to this poem, your reflections really capture a truth I believe in. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

elodie

5 Years Ago

Thank you!

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