The Last Kiss

Desire like poison surging into my soul. 

Oh but to taste your sweet lips-alas, I find myself stymied, paralyzed

as I meander along bereaved

until the sun is vanquished

burning a hole in my eyes

for the last time. 

Reviews

[serpent]

beautifull done... avery emotional write.
write on!

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. excruciating ... but sheer wizardry with words and brevity ...

[LiveLaughLove]

Oooooo... I lkke it. You can feel the emotion behind your words.