Ghost girl.

this might make much sense to you, but i wrote it a while ago, and it pretty much expressed every feeling in my body at that moment in time.

She sits

She stares ahead.

A painful longing in her eyes

A shining faith hidden.

But I can see

Only a few can see.

Those selected few

Are not gifted.

But cursed

By a presence and a past.

A presence of saddening

A past of love.

She loved him

He loved her.

She let go

He held on.

She realised what she had done

A little too late.

When he left her

A piece of her died inside.

It couldn't be replaced

Only remembered.

Few understood

Her trouble and pain.

But those who can see

Can help.

Can try

And heal her pain.

Author's Note

comments and opinions MOST appreciated. :)

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hellko Emily,

A dark feeling of loss, it does hurt when one lets go...and you are left there holding the memories of what you thought was eternity. Forever....is a sin...it seems to some, and isn't long enough to others. Well written.

Regards,

Matthew

[Mariam]

Wow. That is deep. I can feel her emotions, know what she's going through. Really good job!