It's None of Your Business

It's None of Your Business

A Poem by emilythestrange

Frenemey- " What's wrong? "

" It's none of your business! "

 

Enemy- " What's wrong? "

" It's none of your business! "

 

Friend- " What's wrong? "

" It's none of your business! "

 

Friends friend- " Whats wrong? "

" It's none of your business! " 

 

Best Friend- " What's wrong? "

" I'm lonely"

" PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER, WOMEN, YOU HAVE A BEST FRIEND STANDING IN FRONT OF YOU! "

© 2012 emilythestrange


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Well Emily I must say that I think you are just either straight out lying about your age or copying these from somebody else....This cannot possibly be the work of a girl as young as you....This is absolute brilliance...What is so stunning about it is the fact that you take a giant puzzle and just put it all together at the end....This has that typical Emily uniqueness that you always show....If you are as young as you say then this is definitly going to become a full-time career for you...What is soooo scary is the fact that usually kids your age are just learning about the certain styles and products of writing...You already have that nailed and way, way, WAY more!!! Of course everybody knows the value of a best friend, but its the amazingly unique way that you write about it that makes it so stunning...I will say it again...Great job Emily!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thank you... I have to say, most of the credit should go to all my wonderful teachers, and my parent.. read more



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Haha! Not exactly poetic, but a very cool idea :) I have been the friend to the lonely person and even if I was there all day every day.. still lonely =P Eventually you just need to leave them alone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thank you 😉
LOL! Aw, that was sweet. I love the ending so much; a best friend would say that. I must agree with Matty, you don't seem to be a preteen. You would put some of the best writers to shame, mate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Well Emily I must say that I think you are just either straight out lying about your age or copying these from somebody else....This cannot possibly be the work of a girl as young as you....This is absolute brilliance...What is so stunning about it is the fact that you take a giant puzzle and just put it all together at the end....This has that typical Emily uniqueness that you always show....If you are as young as you say then this is definitly going to become a full-time career for you...What is soooo scary is the fact that usually kids your age are just learning about the certain styles and products of writing...You already have that nailed and way, way, WAY more!!! Of course everybody knows the value of a best friend, but its the amazingly unique way that you write about it that makes it so stunning...I will say it again...Great job Emily!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thank you... I have to say, most of the credit should go to all my wonderful teachers, and my parent.. read more
Omg I love this! This is so me! I only tell my best friend things when I'm feeling bad!

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thanks

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