The Warrior

The Warrior

A Poem by emilythestrange

Beware the warrior,

 

She is mad,

She is precise,

She is a tiger,

And she will have no mercy.

 

Her knife shines like ice,

Her hair dark like night,

Her feet fall softly,

Her hands fall hard.

 

In the wind she flows,

Dancing with the leaves,

The light dappling on her skin,

She fools you.

 

© 2013 emilythestrange


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emilythestrange
I got this published! I'm really happy!

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Like the repetition
Like the comparison of feet and hands. Well done.

Nice ending "she fools you" :)

I recommend a larger font.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A splendid one...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


So cool :) I love this! Is it Hunger Game's themed? I know nothing of the books or movie :) But I plan to some day :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


emilythestrange

6 Years Ago

No ☺ I wrote this before I read The Hunger Games 😉 It is about a Celtic warrior woman called Li.. read more
The Nude Writer

6 Years Ago

Ahhhh.. fantastic :)
emilythestrange

6 Years Ago

😝
Short sharp and punchy and you got a lot out, good story included too, I liked it

Posted 6 Years Ago


emilythestrange

6 Years Ago

Thank you
Good job. Short and simple but it was enough to convey a message and strike the soul of the reader. ^_^

Posted 6 Years Ago


emilythestrange

6 Years Ago

Thank you
Enticing, mysterious, and the exact poem that I tend to enjoy. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


emilythestrange

7 Years Ago

Thank you
whooa.. the one who will not i go close with..
really, ur poem here is describe the character
this is interesting n great poem :)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


emilythestrange

7 Years Ago

Thank you
Precise and fierce, that's what I call an amazon warrior ;) Power to the girls, well penned!!!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


I found this poem really interesting, and love the way you put the descriptions in the poem. The descriptions make this poem "real", and I love it!
Also, I love the idea of the poem!
Nice written!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


emilythestrange

7 Years Ago

Thank you
Very nice and interesting poem. I like how you repeated the same sentence in the beginning and in the end.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


emilythestrange

7 Years Ago

Thank you

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