The Warrior

The Warrior

A Poem by emilythestrange

Beware the warrior,

 

She is mad,

She is precise,

She is a tiger,

And she will have no mercy.

 

Her knife shines like ice,

Her hair dark like night,

Her feet fall softly,

Her hands fall hard.

 

In the wind she flows,

Dancing with the leaves,

The light dappling on her skin,

She fools you.

 

© 2013 emilythestrange


Author's Note

emilythestrange
I got this published! I'm really happy!

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Fierce and powerful! Well done!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Girl power! Love it. It's very well written.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love it :D

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Nice!!!!!!!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Warriors are usually guys this is a unique one for you maid a fierce girl warrior! Girls rule in your poem

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

You're welcome
emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

:)
This is really good! I love it! Ur a good writer :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thx
SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Yup
Sounds like someone I don't want to meet in a dark street. The pace to this piece is fantastic! The imagery is so realistic.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


emilythestrange

11 Years Ago

Thank you
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Pax
nice, its like an opening for a book..
great work.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Emily, you wanted me to tell you why I think this is so great...Well the last verse anyways....I think it is a wonderful and powefully descriptive way of showing how nimble and agile she can be...While not giving up stealth at all...And well like I've said before..I can't believe somebody of your age can already be writing so brilliantly.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1087 Views
34 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 26, 2012
Last Updated on April 28, 2013

Author

emilythestrange
emilythestrange

The Place that my Pen may take me, Scotland, United Kingdom



About
Amateur writer, director, live-er, hair brusher, modern-living-girl, and brussel sprout eater, and cleaner. Professional poet, wonder-er, reader, imagin-eer, word user, weirdo, Nerdfighter, Danasaur,.. more..

Writing
God God

A Story by emilythestrange



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Soul Soul

A Poem by lee von cleef


life-support life-support

A Chapter by Pax