Love That I Once Lost

Thought it was love in the begining,

guess i was wrong.

You had me singing 

lyrics to a different song. 

Reviews

[H-Jonesy]

I like it. What i like most is the simplicity. Honestly, those poems that are two and three pages long are just...annoying. So this is refreshing to say the least.
The flow for me at first was--odd, but i read it a second time and got into it.
Over all this was a great peice, like i said, simple and relatable.
nice job, keep it up!

-Harmony/Roxy

[Alicia™]

It was short, simple, and I liked it, but I really think that it could be lengthened into an even deeper poem. Good job...

[Karli]

really, you could make this into a full story. this was short but great:)

[Irena]

short, to the point and well worded
the last two lines are a great way to end it without it seeming too short
great poem(:

[GamingGal]

Pros: Simplicity at it's best.

Cons: None

Overall: A good, simple poem that conveys it's message quite well. Although I enjoy longer poems, it's refreshing to see someone knows how to get their point across in so few words. Good job.

[shedevil]

lovely it had just the right amount of impact

[Bubbleytea]

I was going to add more, I think im just going to leave it like this(:

[XxWhatsername86]

Short, Sweet and all in all Perfect! :)

[Call Me Blu]

I thought u were gonna add more? I like it this way though short and sweet