tears

tears

A Poem by Abbie

Tears run down my face

you don't understand me

what I'm going through

I'm diffrent I get it

Why do you treat me like I'm retarded

I'm not

I though you were my friend

but your a liar

thats why tears run down my face

© 2010 Abbie


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i really like it:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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very thoghtful!?!?!?!?!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is a great expression of heartbreak over a loss of a friend, I have been there many times, and Every word I have spoken to my self (just not so elouquently) Another 100/100 and a favorite for my library

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can deffently relate!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One Error I See Is "Though" Should Be "Thought".
I thought you were my friend.

But This One I Like Cause It Expresses Your Feelings For Someone Close.
Unleash The Moment I Say. Nice Poem Sweetie. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


it's okay to cry, my friend. The sky has done so ever since Adam and Eve, and Cain and Abel.
The sun will shine bright after that... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


how i feel 2 day :(

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Abbie
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taco bell, NM



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