The Well on Cloud Nine

The Well on Cloud Nine

A Poem by SLOVA
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Having everyone else just be a little faster than me while I crave to keep my youth and childhood together through the years.

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I am well on cloud nine
I am well on cloud nine
I am drinking without age
and dormant in this state
I am well on cloud nine

Constant stars see me from the skies
Passing ships of my friends greet me on the tides
Passing ships of my friends greet me as they pass by
I am well on cloud nine

Ocean bells calls and wash old days
I am on my back floating on my own ways
I see nothing but sky and stars
Though thoughts of them are hardly far
I am sober on my fears
And I have no doubt that they are near
I count the sphere like I did cars
Do you think they too fear what they are?
I am safe on cloud nine

My loves give me refuge out here at sea
My loves give me promise out of remedy
There the astronauts tell me that home is close to me
Here passing ships of my friends don't look on fondly
I have found a secret place that will only be mine
Now and then I am safe in the well on cloud nine

© 2015 SLOVA


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Hopeful and good words.
"My loves give me refuge out here at sea
My loves give me promise out of remedy"
The above lines were my favorite. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Dak
realizing where to go for a happy place can be one of the greatest points in a life, great poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


everyone needs a place to feel safe, mine is in the world of words. Cloud nine sounds like a nice place to be.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That really goes deep. Your own special place that gives you comfort. Somewhere to take solace. No fear there. Cloud nine is the very best place for you to be.....Kyam

Posted 8 Years Ago



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