Like a Good Dream

One lover who is spiritual believing they will arise to Heaven but their lover is skeptical of whether or not the afterlife exists.

You can tell my baby

that I'm coming down the hall

Packed and scripted lately

I want to see it all

Got my sneakers tied over my shoulder

I'm coming at the call

My baby thinks it's over

But I can see it all

They've got bottles in the air

And feathers everywhere

I'm barefoot at the doorway

I'm six feet under the surface

And I'm having me a ball

I wish that you could see it

One day, you and me could have it all

I wish that you'd believe this

One day, you and me could have it all

I'm six feet under the surface

And I'm having me a ball

Reviews

[Dak]

i really liked the way you put the words together. made me feel relaxed while reading.

[Leo]

Wow, some imagination you got..Very engaging from start to finish..I like it!

[terry smith]

outside the physical realm everything is possible...nice write!! :)