SPIRIT OF RHYTHM AND RHYME

Hypnotizing nature

Becoming one with the stage

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Rolled to the feeling and pulse of the ocean

A figure eight motion of hips

A controlled pace in sway of traditions unmasked

Fragile in movement

Pride in stance

The heart intertwines with land, honor and hour

Outstretched arms welcome the lovely sound

In the wind colors of tempo are cast

Bond is clear

Peace is grasped

Drops of the sun flow through the fingers

A language of stories in spell

Gracefully calling to dance alongside the spirits of past

Chanting of dreams

Emotion of trance

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Complex art form

Conveying message through the soul

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

((HAWAII))

Reviews

[KAREN]

WOW! Full of rhythm all on it's on. Great imagery and flow. Made me feel like dancing. Love the format.

[WhiteWillow]

A perfect interpretation of the picture. Absolutely love the last line, so right on!! Great piece.

[Rene Velez]

It had a Hawaiian feel to it, I could see the grass skirts swaying by the ocean...

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was a wonderful read... you really captured an image and it showed to the reader.... great write

[André-J-Franklin]

Wonderful read... it shines alot of light that dance isn't just dance there a reason behind it. Keep up the great work!

Such a beautiful read... I really enjoyed reading this. If you took me to Hawaii, the place I ever want to be before I die... lovely work.

[Art Sun]

so many different styles of dance and music within this world...all we have to do is become part of their rhythm and rhyme...nice work on this poem...

[Inyourshadow]

The poem conveys movement and the gentle sway accompanied the picture perfectly, this captures the dance and the harmony of nature beautifully. Keep em' coming

[Muse]

You captured the spirit and dance of this woman wonderfully! The imagery is magnificant. And I can feel the rhythm and beat behind your words. This is art at it's finest! Fantastic work my dear! :)

[Amy Bumpas]

This is deep, and inspirational...it has a beat to it as well, like a rap song...slow,
and focused.