HE WRITES

he thinks of her...

 

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

She helps-

 

It drove him crazy how his casual stare caused her to shy…

The reason it drove him crazy was because he was never a shy person 

But the impact he felt from her caused him to do exactly that

What turned him on was the simplicity in her personality

That feeling of total comfort and homage he found in her company

 

The air was warm and the sky was silenced amid the stars…

Like kids they climbed on top of the hood of his car

Lazily met cuddled into each other just gazing in the dark

The rise and fall melody of Puget Sound is what softly played

She smelled of honey poured over brown sugar… or was it vanilla rain?

 

Unknowingly their hands linked while talking, how fitting he pledged…

They traced on broken relationships, mistakes that were made, and regrets

They laughed at spontaneous moments, childhood memories, and rivaled over football teams

He spoke of his fears, his wants, his past and future plans

While she spoke of her dreams, her job, her family, and wanting to run away to distant lands…

 

They spent hours out there… just talking…

Taking in on the whole sense of enjoying each other’s conversation

They had spent sometime together before 

But that specific night he looked at her in a different light

His eyes really locked in her eyes

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

That when the role of bravery quiets and the still falls

Sunnyside Beach, September 9^th is what he touches on

The ambiance of innocence held in that night before he left is what he remembers

It pulls him to ease against the rough and pressured atmosphere

It pulls him back to himself…

 

She helps- 

 

 

 

Author's Note

**cracks a smile** note received... from over seas........

Reviews

[EMF]

This is beautiful. I tip my hat... No. I take my hat off and bow.

[closed..acct]

WOW this is really wonderful!
I enjoyed this powerful write,
Like the passion, awesome write!

[Revery]

This is incredible Emphasis. You have captured so much in your poem, a story with all its bittersweet passion. The heartache of separation and hope enduring in spite of war and not guarantees. Congratulations, fantastic!

[Siddhartha]

Oh, how love grows and transforms over time. Love can come from anywhere and love that grows out of a deep friendship is the most cherished of all. Seeing each other in a different light, understanding each other's wants and aspirations, so much to like in this piece. Seriously what's not to love.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is an amazing story of falling in love and seeing someone differently than you first perceived them to be. I like the whole concept of this piece and the story weaved in each line.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There is no greater muse then love and the person who brought it into your life... we all need to travel that broken road to make the love we receive appreciated and worthy. Such a lovely poem Hot mama.

Damn sis.... you hit it here. All I see and feel in this write, is so coincidence.
09-09-2009, I was on a beach too lol ;) and the picture...
I feel you deeply whitin this one. As I feel the bliss in between~
Wonderfully done! Extraordinary write! wished I had a lyrical wand as yours, I would tip it across the UNIVERSE :) LOVE IT!

[Me]

Well written piece

[zero binty]

HOLY CRAP. And you my dear E have scored the only one hundred I've ever given in a review.

[jennifer little]

great write good job