Without Me.

Without Me.

A Poem by Mily

It's not the same without you around. 
Not talking to you is killing me. 
I havent messaged you because I feel that if, 
You missed me, you would let me know. 

But all I ever wanted was for you to be happy, 
and so if you're happy, 
even if it's without me, 
I'm glad. 

I hope she's making you smile, and enjoy..
I'm sorry i couldn't do the same. 
Just know, that if you want to come back, 
I will always be here. 

© 2014 Mily


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It begins with a somber mood 'without', 'killing' and 'missed'. Then it transitions to midway with 'wanted' and 'glad' to end with hope with 'want to come back' and 'always be here'. It has movement. Continue working at it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Added on February 22, 2014
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Tags: killing, happy, love, smile, joy, always

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Mily
Mily

San Diego , CA



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