Should be you.

i know my writing sucks a*s, just need to let my thoughts free

And here I lay, 

at 1:46 in the morning, 

hearing someone else sleep. 

Joking with him will never be like joking with you. 

Having him make me smile, 

will never make me feel how you did. 

I each time I hear his slow breathing, 

blissfully sleeping, dreaming about a girl much prettier than me, 

I will lay here remembering how he, should be you. 

Reviews

[Thaddius]

You are stripped down and honest. This is wrenching. It's so unaffected it's probably 38 times better than you can ever tell.

[Thaddius]

Man if I had just wrote this 15 minutes earlier it would have been 1.46 in the morning

[Mai Marquez]

So terribly sad, Emily. Oh how our hearts yearn for those who we should be with, and sometimes while we struggle with our reality we try to fit others into their reserved space. It has been my experience, sadly, that it rarely works. Those places in our hearts, were custom fitted.